Two weeks, 4 views of the first chapter of my fic. I wonder if I just have it labeled wrong.

Regardless, I'm plugging away on chapter 6. Sometimes even if you know A to B to C you're just not sure how to move from point to point and make it sound right instead of like crap. If I can get this scene rolling I'll be good to go as I've got a good idea what I'm doing with the rest of the chapter.